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J.E. Petersen's avatar

Amazing! It's all connected! Great backstory for Laura -- I'm really digging the way that pregnancy test is becoming a more and more interesting plot football. But now I want to hear the rest of her story! Write a sequel later maybe please?

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Lorelei Jonason's avatar

Okay, maybe after Chapter 10 is out there'll be an unofficial epilogue. :)

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Wil Dalton's avatar

Yes! Nothing is as expected! Love it!

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Kerrie Noor's avatar

Wow I didn't see that coming pergnacy wise

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Gail Cook's avatar

Even in stories life doesn't always go to plan. Poor Laura. Wow the way that this story is evolving is keeping me wanting more. Now I've got a whole week to wait.

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Meg Oolders's avatar

Seeds are germinating... literally and figuratively.😊 Loved this, Lorelei.

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Anthony Lora's avatar

Lauren seems quite talented at sewing chaos in everything she touches, whether she means to or not. You really have me curious how the rest of her story goes. Way to go!

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Mike Miller's avatar

Very nicely done, taking everything from before and weaving back in. This entire project is shaping up nicely as a read, and I'm sure the authors before you are tickled by the twists while those to come appreciate the foundation.

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