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Caleb Palmquist's avatar

This concept is so cool. I love how thoroughly you've considered the implications of the body-swapping power.

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Lorelei Jonason's avatar

Thanks! :)

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Stan Palmquist's avatar

Lorelei, Thanks for sending this to me. It was interesting. It makes me want to read more. You are very creative

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Lorelei Jonason's avatar

Thanks so much! :)

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Larissa Najjar's avatar

I like the concept of body swapping. With the swap, we get thrown right into the action of the scene along with Maya. That was nicely done.

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